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6 min read

Theo Lindqvist

We tested 60 ad hooks so you don't have to

Sixty openings, three budgets and four winners. What we learned about what people click.

Over six weeks we ran sixty different first lines for the same offer across three small brands. Most did nothing. Four did a lot.

What won

Specific beat clever. Lines with a number, a place or a price outperformed lines with a joke almost every time.

What lost

Questions that start with ‘Are you ready’. Nobody is ready. Nobody has ever been ready.

What to try

Write ten openings that each contain something specific. Test them with a small budget for three days. Keep the top two, replace the rest.

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Got a brief? Let’s make some noise.

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hello@brightloud.example

0117 496 0142

New briefs answered within a day

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Brightloud Ltd

14 Corn Street

Bristol BS1 1JQ

Studio hours

Mon to Thu, 9 to 6

Fri, 9 to 4

Weekends: we’re filming

brightloud

© 2026 Brightloud Ltd. Demo agency for a website template.

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Got a brief? Let’s make some noise.

Say hello

hello@brightloud.example

0117 496 0142

New briefs answered within a day

Find us

Brightloud Ltd

14 Corn Street

Bristol BS1 1JQ

Studio hours

Mon to Thu, 9 to 6

Fri, 9 to 4

Weekends: we’re filming

brightloud

© 2026 Brightloud Ltd. Demo agency for a website template.

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